Friday, October 25, 2019

Nobody (poetic journaling)

 



I'm Nobody!  Who are you?
Are you - Nobody - Too?
Then there's a pair of us!
Don't tell!  They'd advertise - you know!

How dreary - to be - Somebody!
How public - like a Frog -
To tell one's name - the livelong June -
To an admiring Bog!

(Emily Dickinson used a lot of exclamation marks ! and dashes -  in her writing.  I'll go along with that!   I think you need them when you're writing - short.)  
So would I add the parentheses (  )  To say a little more -  like   pointing out a limb on a mighty Oak.  (A metaphor.) 


(Emily -  I'm too stubborn to be - anyone but a folk artist!)